UNFINISHED DUEL

Mar 11 2008  | Views 438 |  Comments  (33)
What is it, Love? You turn away… Clench-jaw, fist-hands, brow kissed by silky s... Expand

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  LakshmiMukundan posted 4 mnths ago

Thnx tanushri and for the visit
Lakshmi



  tanushri podder posted 4 mnths ago

Beautiful poem...loved every word of it....



  LakshmiMukundan posted 4 mnths ago

Thanks kala,
for dropping in and appreciating
lakshmi



  LakshmiMukundan posted 4 mnths ago

Gopal correct ....flights of fancy maybe

Lakshmi



  Kala BN posted 4 mnths ago

Lakshmi.....so sweet....the craving for love...well expressed



  V-S-Gopal posted 4 mnths ago

Lakshmi,
Simple yet flighty!
vs gopal



  LakshmiMukundan posted 4 mnths ago

Yup, you got it right the first time, Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeera!
Lakshmi



  LakshmiMukundan posted 4 mnths ago

Yes Sharmila
I was trying to portray young lovers here........later, she won't cry that easily and his reaction would be "oh heck, she's become a watering pot again!!"
thanx for dropping by
Lakshmi



  LakshmiMukundan posted 4 mnths ago

Thnx geekunnel and good of you to drop by
Lakshmi



  Meera San posted 4 mnths ago

Lakshmi

Cool :) it is the time...when it becomes...."we agree to disagree" - *sigh* differences. 

Meera





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