BLOOD EMBROIDERY

May 4 2008  | Views 469 |  Comments  (69)
  The maid answered the door while Tina was having a massage. The boutique, as usual, had home... Expand

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  LakshmiMukundan posted 1 week ago

Raj-ji
Thnx for the good words and the visit
lakshmi



  Raj Arumugam posted 1 week ago

That is an amazing story - the way you build up from the world of luxury to the world of misery...

A great story, Lakshmi - a great story that has artistic merit and yet a lesson for each one of us...Madam or not.



  LakshmiMukundan posted 1 week ago

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Thnx or the visit and the good comments

lakshmi



  matheikal posted 1 week ago

What a wonderful presentation of the contemporary scene, its glitter and horror.  Great narration.



  LakshmiMukundan posted 1 week ago

Thnx Maya
for the good commnets and for dropping by

Lakshmi



  MayaAnil posted 1 week ago

Dear Lakhmi,

This is really a touching and emotional story..Portraiting the luxury on one side and the pain of the innocent on the other side..Well narrated

MayaAnil



  LakshmiMukundan posted 1 week ago

Ranjini
you 've got the essence of what i was trying to portray in words.thnx for the comments and yr visit.
Yeah, I have a couple of school friends who have gone all sopisticated on me...when we met i used to grab them in a bear hug but I noticed they had become very conscious of their .....um, facade?  so now I too am more laid back in my greetings.That's where i noticed this air-muaaaing!! 
lakshmi



  LakshmiMukundan posted 1 week ago

Avinash
Glad to see you back
thnx for the visit and the comments

lakshmi



  R-Sharma posted 1 week ago

Hi Lakshmi,

That was a touching story! She came so close to that poor child and yet so far!
You have a keen sense of reading the inner mind. We read such sad stories and immediately feel secure that our lives are so sheltered!  Somehow those souls seem worthless!

Wonderful narration! I liked this line the best -
they carefully muaaa-ed the air next to each others’ well made up cheeks
Ranjini



  Avinashjee posted 1 week ago

A very good story.
Avinash





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